Net-Fic Review: The Wedding Night Says: Champagne and Kisses for Everyone (Doctor Who)

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Title: The Wedding Night Says: Champagne and Kisses for Everyone
Universe: Doctor Who

Author: Zauberer Sirin
Size: 12K
Tags: Short Story, Missing Scene
Characters: Rory Williams, Eleventh Doctor
Ranking: Very Good
Review: http://www.katspace.org/reviews/netfic/Author/ZaubererSirin#Title_TheWeddingNightSaysChampagneandKissesforEveryone

Summary: Rory Williams wonders how he could ever forget the Doctor.

A lovely, lovely set of missing scenes from the end of "The Big Bang". Happiness and awkwardness and hugs, Rory, the Doctor; the thoughts in the Doctor's head going on like a runaway train.

Quote: Afterwards the Doctor watches Rory and Amy dance, overcome with a sort of longing that can only be associated with extreme happiness, not just other people's happiness but his own, his intense overwhelming happiness not just for Amy and Rory but at Amy and Rory, this glowing pride he has for them, words like glee and joy shimmering like secrets inside his pockets.

So... what do you think?

Comments

[watervole]

It's not bad, but it doesn't really grab me. Maybe that's because missing scene stories don't really do it for me these days. I like a bit of plot.