Net-Fic Review: A Winter's Tale (Doctor Who/Narnia)

[kerravonsen]

Title: A Winter's Tale
Universe: Doctor Who/Narnia
Author: Misura
Size: 8K
Review: http://www.katspace.org/reviews/netfic/Author/Misura#Title_AWintersTale

So... what do *you* think?

Comments

[watervole.livejournal.com]

Not that smitten. I felt it should have been longer. Bit more descriptive text would have come in handy on occasion.

I like the practical Susan, but the dream of Aslan didn't seem to be a real part of the story.

[kerravonsen]

I think the dream was supposed to happen when she was unconscious; it plays on the theme of her being afraid, it was part of her characterisation, IMHO.

It could do with some polishing, though, I'd agree, now that I've re-read it.

[dreamflower]

A very nice combination. I hadn't read Doctor Who and Susan before, so I found it quite intriguing. Loved her reaction to the icy planet.

[pinkdormouse.livejournal.com]

I thought that one was lovely.