Finish-a-thon first draft done!

Just in under the wire, since I needed to get it done before I went away. I've sent it to one beta, there may be another, but I think I also need someone to Brit-pick it. Any volunteers? It's Doctor Who, "Parting of the Ways" AU, about 8500 words.
(If you don't hear back from me it will be because I've already gone; I'm leaving tomorrow morning. My time)