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Kathryn A. ([personal profile] kerravonsen) wrote2020-02-29 12:43 pm

The Revision of Fishes

I've just listed this piece in my shop. It went through quite a few changes before it got to its final form.

This was the original fluid art:

Atlantean_Window-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440-ORIG.png


And there was this cool clip art I wanted to use:

Atlantean_Window-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440-CLIP1.png


And playing around got me this:

Atlantean_Window-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440-ORIG3.png


Which of course made me think of the ocean, and fishes. So I added fishes, and seaweed, and thought I was done:

FishesV1-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440.jpg


I was thinking of this as some sort of space-age undersea habitat where one was looking out at the fishes, but a friend pointed out that it looked more like a net that had caught the fishes, which was totally NOT what I wanted. At first, I threw away the mesh, and tried making a frame, a combination of plain and fancy, but I wasn't satisfied. So I decided to revisit the mesh, and came up with this:

FishesV2-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440.jpg


Which was an improvement, but I wanted to revisit the frame, because a window out into the ocean came back to my original "habitat" idea. But in playing with the frame, I started messing with textures, and that gave me some interesting things... I couldn't get the space-age "brushed metal" look to work, so I ended up going in the opposite direction, with stone.

Behold, the sunken Atlantis with a window out into the ocean: "Atlantean Window".


FishesV3-fluid_art_S050-20191222_185440.jpg


And there you have it. Revisions, or perhaps detours... not exactly detours, because each version did lead to the next. What do you think?
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[personal profile] watervole 2020-02-29 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
The final version is my favourite, though I'm still trying to decide whether I like the frame or not. However, I think overall the frame adds a sense of perspective.